Jan Donley

Falling

4 May 09

All I knew was that I had to hurry. My muscles tensed. My blood rushed. I wasn’t even sure why. I rolled forward into the night. I pushed through the crowded city street. My own heartbeat fell in with the footsteps, the car horns, the tires thumping down the avenue. I was outside in and inside out. We all blended—all the beats and the clangs and the whines. My pulse was no longer my own. I had lost the rhythm.

And then it happened. The staircase must have been there all along, and I missed my step. I tumbled down. I heard myself clatter and clack. I saw the air turn. And I landed alone in a clump at the bottom of the stairs. A dim light gleamed over a closed door. The outside rhythms had stopped. There was no push inside. No rush outside. I lay there a long time, at the bottom of that staircase, waiting for a pulse. My own steady beat. My own. Steady. Beat.

Comments

I felt that!
I believe you proved Newton’s second law.
The change of momentum of a body is proportional to the impulse impressed on the body, and happens along the straight line on which that impulse is impressed.”

celeste starr May 11, 09:35

Wow. It’s great that my little tiny piece of prose serves as an example of one of Newton’s laws of motion. Thanks for the comment.

Jan May 11, 12:40

hope you’re o.k.
guri just told me about it.
i get to see her tomorrow.
we’re reading together
on saturday here in austin.
wish you could join us.
dj

dj May 13, 12:07

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